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    dots Submission Name: Voicedots
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    Author: hollowshell
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 39/40/14
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsVoicedots
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    He grins, sitting with pride,
    he smiles, sarcastically wide.
    But he is your boyfriend, your own choice.
    I sit here numb, without a voice.

    It starts the same, the usual meet.
    Everyone smiles, as we seat.
    I play the clown, the outgoing guy,
    you are the victim, the noticable sigh.
    It's not going well, I can't deny.
    It grows harder and harder for me to try.

    He grins, sitting with pride,
    he smiles, pain stakingly wide.
    But he is your boyfriend, your own choice.
    I sit here numb, without a voice.

    It goes the same, the usual greet.
    Only I smile, as I take my seat.
    I play the clown, the sad guy,
    you claim the victim, the noticable sigh.
    It never goes well, I can't deny.
    It grows harder and harder for me to try.

    He grins, sitting with pride,
    he smiles, taking my pain in his stride.
    He is your boyfriend, your own choice.
    I sit here numb, without a voice.




    Submitted on 2010-06-25 20:33:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was an interesting way you put the usual loving from afar. I dare say I liked it! I've been here plenty of times. I wish you the best of luck!

    "He is your boyfriend, your own choice."
    That's my favorite line, it is so simple but emotes so much hurt that the one you wanted has chosen someone else. Great layout of the whole poem.
    | Posted on 2010-06-28 00:00:00 | by Kaygrl | [ Reply to This ]


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