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    dots Submission Name: Freedom Ridedots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 477
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsFreedom Ridedots
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    Fare enough, the sun does shine.
    Far over the country line.
    Feeding my soul of hungry tender,
    The beauty of the country sides splendor.

    Enlightened by the quiet roam,
    The silence beckons me home.
    Aloft the grassy plain,
    And dancing in the wild rain.

    The trees of golden hue,
    To the moist drops of dew.
    The beauty of the country side.
    Let freedom ride.




    Submitted on 2010-06-28 11:40:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Amazing, I can imagine it. Oh how I long to be there. ^.^
    | Posted on 2010-06-29 00:00:00 | by Destinyjackson | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful piece, keep it up :)
    | Posted on 2010-06-29 00:00:00 | by hollowshell | [ Reply to This ]
      I want to be there now! your choice of words are perfect.

    Buster
    | Posted on 2010-06-28 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]


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