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    dots Submission Name: Poem for a girldots
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    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPoem for a girldots
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    Shattered dreams of forgotten memories
    Twist and twine thriving and teasing
    Tortured tattered soul sleeplessly breathing
    Forgotten and lost as ever
    For you...




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