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    dots Submission Name: A Heart that healsdots
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    Author: TalentedChild
    ASL Info:    17
    Elite Ratio:    1.85 - 19/81/106
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1018
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    Bytes: 1470



    Description:
       Everyone has there heart broken. Many of us that have ever been in a relationship, know that's true. Sometimes it doesn't always stay the way it started when you first met them, or the way it felt in the beginning. That spark that you once felt, fades. That's why we have to look for more then just sparks or, butterflies in your stomach, while they might feel good at the moment, they fade away after time. You have to look deep into that person, and ask yourself, Is this the person I want to be with for the rest of my life, is this the person that truly makes me happy, even when there not. If you answered yes to any of these questions, then you know exactly what I'm talking about when I say "Love Isn't Just Temporary." It isn't something your connected with just because you can be. Love is Life-long, it is a journey between to people, from start to end. Sometimes we are lucky, and sometimes we are not. But that's what we are living to learn. Who is worth risking a heartbreak for, and who is worth waiting to spend the rest of your life with,
    either way, we all find someone for us eventually.


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    My heart that bleeds on a constant basis
    My lips that lie can you taste this

    My wrist that scars from deep within
    Demons that charge open and fill my soul with sin

    I scream out loud for the world to hear
    Is there anyone there can you taste my fear?

    To the mouth that curses
    to the head
    filled with agony
    Can you hear my screams "Is this really happening?"

    To all of you that can feel my fears
    Sew up those wounds, dry up them tears

    For all of those afraid to let yourself awaken
    Throw those demons in a pit
    for your heart is now taken

    Call out to your pain all your wounds and your sorrow

    Look up to the stars for all your hurt will be healed tomorrow
    Look up to me and then you'll see the different side there is to me

    of wish and hope of better days of no longer being twisted of fear in a cage

    There is such a day I know its' true maybe someday you can feel it too

    The hurt and the pain will soon fade away
    and then you won't have to say "there will be no tomorrow" for tomorrow is today

    And you can know you will no longer have to live that way.

    for your heart that bleeds on a constant basis
    will no longer cry out to me, cuz you know you can face this.




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