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    dots Submission Name: Rambles part 2dots
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    Author: armand
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    dotsRambles part 2dots
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    Maybe once a time there was something here?
    A talent ready for release upon your world and mine
    but as we all kn ow thing change as life passes us by.
    Drunken without words to describe how it is theses days wondering if my ideas would turn to rambles without sense, or is that nonsense? hell I don't know
    except it feels good not thinking about Gods or the teaching of which I have questioned




    Submitted on 2010-06-30 18:40:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Maybe at one time there was something here
    but as we all know life passes us by

    too drunken to describe how it is these days
    my ideas become rambles without any sense

    except it feels good not thinking about gods
    or any of the teaching that I have questioned


    These are the pieces that had some meaning for me.
    | Posted on 2013-12-28 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      this sounds like true resolve, which is the purpose. nuff said.
    | Posted on 2010-10-29 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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