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    Author: cyberpoet
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 28/18/22
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Misc/Fuck it all
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    Never get to tangled up in the possibilities
    Think about what is and then think about what could be
    Then forget everything about it and go back to what was
    False hope no more I'm done hoping




    Submitted on 2010-06-30 22:51:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      never get too tangled
    in the possibilities

    think about what is
    and what could be

    then forget everything
    and go back to what was

    False hope no more
    I'm done hoping


    Just some thoughts on structure, disappointment and rejection.

    Bill
    | Posted on 2010-07-01 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Is this advice or a reflection? Seems pretty cynical :/ I hope you find whatever you are looking for.
    | Posted on 2010-07-01 00:00:00 | by awastedsky | [ Reply to This ]


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