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    dots Submission Name: Anxietydots
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    Author: Belle Tragedie
    ASL Info:    18/ F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 3/8/20
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAnxietydots
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    Anxiety is when
    You need more money
    You can't get hours at work
    You pay rent for no curfew.

    Anxiety is when
    Things don't go like they were planned
    People are mean
    Your best friends ignore you.

    Anxiety is when
    Your ride loses his phone
    You have work but can't sleep
    You have shit to do and little time to do it.


    Anxiety is when
    You have to pass your classes to pay the bills
    You have to figure out bank accounts
    You have credit scores.

    Anxiety is when
    Your heart races for no reason
    You don't want to be alone while everyone is asleep
    You're scared you won't wake up.

    Anxiety is when
    The little things make your world crash around you
    You just want to press a button to make them better
    You wish everything was easy again.




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