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    dots Submission Name: I Remember It Alldots
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    Author: Belle Tragedie
    ASL Info:    18/ F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 3/8/20
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Misc/Nostalgia
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    dotsI Remember It Alldots
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    I go to take a shower
    Wash my hair and body
    Shave my legs and sometimes my arms
    Dry off, put clothes and makeup on.
    And spray the perfume.
    It smells just like her.
    I remember it all.

    Do you remember freshman year,
    When we were all so silly,
    And thought we were so misunderstood?
    Do you remember Halloween?
    She was a cowgirl.
    I, a pirate.
    I remember it all.

    It's been two years.
    So long, but still so fresh.
    I remember crying in my room.
    Crying with my friends.
    Making bracelets as a promise to live in her memory.
    I remember it all.

    The fucker who did it is going to pay
    And some how, it's just not enough.
    The smile on her face will never return.
    And at this point, it's all just too much.
    Because I remember it all.

    I lie on the couch, waiting at night,
    To see her pop up again in my dreams.
    But lately it's just dark.
    And when I close my eyes it's like I'm there.
    With out seeing first hand, but knowing too much
    I remember it all.

    I remember it all.




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