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    dots Submission Name: Mistakedots
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    Author: 5secondsforme
    ASL Info:    19/M/Brazil
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 6/14/12
    Words: 620
    Class/Type: Poetry/Vampire
    Total Views: 539
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    Bytes: 4082



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    dotsMistakedots
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    It hadn't been just right
    Something was definitly wrong
    She didnt feel awake that night
    Through her window there was no owl's song
    she had awoken by pure surprise
    a sudden frightful fate
    she heard in dreams sorrow and cries
    she believed her nightmare to be filled with hate
    chills ran done her back
    pain ran down her spine
    her fortress under a cruel attack
    her blood to him the finest wine.

    He made his way through the doors
    he made his way through the house
    his skin printed with the lips of whores
    blood covering his white blouse
    He had no intention to awake her
    terror was not his skill
    Those ears heard every stir
    and she understood he had come to kill.

    Standing from bed with a gentle stride
    she decided to take a walk
    one step at a time with dishonest pride
    her fear began to talk
    'I do not wish to die'
    it said
    'I do not wish to go.'
    But as the darkness made it's approach
    there wasn't much to show
    The end was near as her steps grew longer
    The darkness began to creep
    slowly her heart beat steadily stronger
    as this stalker prepared her eternal sleep

    He licked his lips
    he felt his teeth
    those fangs with such sharp tips
    this hunger with no sheath
    stepping, one, two and three
    his pacience slowly dieing
    he let his hunger free
    sinking in she began by crying
    the pain deafening
    the sutil defeat unrecognised
    her life abandoning
    dropping it's way undisguised
    She knew it was over
    but it felt so right
    grabbing his left shoulder
    she deepened his kiss of night.
    'goodbye sweet world'
    'hello sweet darkness'
    her vision swirled
    the floor beneath them a bloody mess.
    It ended slowly
    he did enjoy it
    he knew of nothing holy
    he just licked at where he bit
    the tiny openings enough to kill
    the drain to his satisfaccion
    he had finally taken his fill
    the things he'd done were of no imidiant reaction.
    But as he stood and watched her lie limp
    he began to ponder her way of thought
    she didnt seem afraid, not much of a whimp
    he realized she had not fought
    'have a done her a favor?'
    he asked
    'Have I done a good deed?'
    but as this happened she began to move
    she had been implanted with a terrorific seed
    'NO!' he exclaimed
    his world spinning and distraut
    for this he could never be blamed
    this he had never been taught
    as her eyes turned red and her teeth turned sharp
    he was unaware of time
    her feet took stand at the sound of a harp
    and she knew about his pale crime
    'Do not worry'
    she whispered low
    stepping to his side
    'I shall not tell a soul, we will not make a show.'
    'Come sweet master,
    creator of my being.'
    'Kill with me and let us stir
    let us begin a life of seeing.
    Show me the world through these eyes of evil
    show me what it means to live
    you have taken my life from retrieval
    Now show me what to give!'

    Her enthusiasm frightened him
    her whit abit too far
    her smile dark and grim
    he left her with a dangerous scar.
    He dare not say the word
    he dare not tempt more fate
    Things had not rightely ocurred
    and now it was all too late
    he had unleashed a monster on earth
    he had broken every rule
    with this girl's rebirth
    he knew he had been a fool
    as she took up flight
    and he lost her from his sight
    death took over life
    the world was to suffer strife.
    -END-




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