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    dots Submission Name: The Hurricane & The Matchdots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
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    dotsThe Hurricane & The Matchdots

    Sea and shore; Terrorize moments between a white washed face crashing- no more.
    A grave with no stone, yet the tides brought her home.
    Kelp and faith helped to retain a face so divine.
    Chattering of Crabs curse and feast on her iodine

    Submitted on 2010-07-02 20:26:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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