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    dots Submission Name: Is this a contradiction?dots

    Author: iscreamicry
    ASL Info:    20/f/nsw/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.47 - 34/26/24
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsIs this a contradiction?dots

    By Jocelyn Leanne Dyball

    I hate the way you look at me as if you're unaware,
    of what goes on inside my head whenever you aren't there.

    I hate the way you're the way you are,
    the way you'll always be.
    I hate the way you see the way I am, the way you talk to me.

    I hate the way you don't love me, I know you never will.
    I hate the way it hurts so much, so much that it makes me ill.

    I hate the way that whatever you say is enough to make cry,
    I hate the way that you know exactly what to say just to see me smile.

    I hate the way you stole my heart and I can't even hold your hand,
    the way that when I am around you i feel like I'm choking on sand.

    I hate the way that I don't hate you, ask anyone, it's true.

    I hate the way that I don't hate these things because, really,
    I love you.

    Submitted on 2010-07-04 23:38:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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