Onryō - The Mirror Smiled Back by HisNameIsNoMore

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Submission Name: Onryō - The Mirror Smiled Back dots

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Author:	HisNameIsNoMore
ASL Info:	28 - Male - Ohio
Elite Ratio:	3.03 - 75/186/232
Words:	46

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Onryō - The Mirror Smiled Back dots

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Iridescence face - Brilliance displace
Iridescent smile - Wile amongst guile

It's had enough - Enough is enough -- enough...

It has buried itself deep inside.
Can't you see it? Right there at the edge of the light!
Onryō spread your vengeance

Submitted on 2010-07-05 03:05:11 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I enjoyed the rhyming here. It's a beautiful little piece, and the imagery you started pleased me very much. The perfect balance of not enough and too much.

C.J.
| Posted on 2010-07-05 00:00:00 | by Crimsonpathways | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.