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    dots Submission Name: Sleep Tonightdots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 673
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 960



    Description:
       Getting past my past and getting on with my future.


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    dotsSleep Tonightdots
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    I'll lay my head down
    in the daylight

    I'll dream of you and how things used to be
    Right

    As the sun haunts my lucid visions

    I'll think of shooting stars and maybe get
    some sleep tonight

    I'll be burning here under the sun
    and my twisted mind

    Thinking of you and how things used to be
    right

    I'll not wish
    I'll not want
    I'll not regret

    I'll lay down in the sunlight
    and maybe
    get some sleep tonight

    As you haunt my dreams

    With the little things...
    You were my Valentine
    said you'd always be mine

    We traveled that old road together
    to find new places and adventure

    I'll lay those thoughts aside...

    And maybe
    I'll get some sleep tonight.




    Submitted on 2010-07-05 17:32:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is going on my favourites list, I can totally relate.... Great work! xx
    | Posted on 2010-07-11 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the use of repetition. I think it definitely worked for this. I don't understand what happened to cause the feeling but I get the restlessness from lack of sleep and mulling things over too much. keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2010-07-07 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]


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