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    dots Submission Name: Final Warningdots

    Author: thebadguy9999
    ASL Info:    32/m/ms
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 0/2/111
    Words: 303
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsFinal Warningdots

    You say You're a Christian but I know mush better.If you were right with me there'd be no need for this letter.I've seen all your ways and heard all your words.To be called a child of mine is more than you deserve.I am removing my hand,You are own your own.I don't know why you think I'll let you carry on.You've done my will at times but that's not good enough.You think this life is hard It has yet to become rough.I am gonna test you for until now you've not been true.I have shown you your mistakes and the right things that you should do.Why will you not listen,Do you have no love for me?Do you think I didn't think of you when I hung upon that tree?I am calling you to me,This is it,It's your eternity you choose.Why are you going back,Do you know what you will lose?You will lose your life,You will play with me no longer.I am tired of this,All your sin keeps growing stronger.You have to hit your knees or be brought down to the ground.Leave from all those sinful people,You must not hang around.You know what I have said,You must come out from among them.When you hang around with sharks soon with them you start to swim.What is wrong with you,Was my example not enough?Did the Devil make you cry,Were his temptations far too tough?You go good for awhile and then you just backslide.You should have known this was no easy ride.You know what I went through upon this earth.I was so hated they tried to kill me at birth.I want you to come back,This is not the life for you.Why won't you keep going,I will see you through.This is my final warning,No more messages for you.To avoid the flames of Hell to me you must be true.

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