You do a good job of describing that wonderful feeling that comes over one when the one they love appears. Us guys are worse than you lovely gals, I think; I used to feel almost "tonguetied" when my lady love appeared, and became absolutely clumsy!
Ahh, love. Always quick to inspire we poets. I love some of the imagery, even if it is a bit cliché (what's love without cliché?). I do feel after rereading it a few times that the second and third stanzas would flow better if the were together in a single stanza, it just seems like they were meant to be together. Nice write, keep it up!