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    dots Submission Name: Divedots
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    Author: ares_nuke_1
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 106/151/76
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 739
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 267



    Description:
       I'm thinking of structuring a song around these lyrics using this as either the first verse or as the chorus...not sure yet. Right now i want to see how the words stand on there own.


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    dotsDivedots
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    What is my purpose?
    Why am I here?
    I've been living on the surface
    Where everything is clear
    so I've got to dive deeper
    if I'm to conquer my fears
    so that I can find acceptance
    from everyone around here




    Submitted on 2010-07-07 08:33:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great flow, simple words, powerful. Good work. :)
    | Posted on 2010-07-11 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]


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