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    dots Submission Name: To Feign My Sorrow?dots
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    Author: Astarael
    ASL Info:    18/Girl/Baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    5.28 - 81/88/32
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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       There are people in my life that I shouldn't feel this way about, but I do and I can't help it.


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    dotsTo Feign My Sorrow?dots
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    It bewilders me to think that I might not cry if you died,
    Only shrug my shoulders as they lowered your coffins into the ground;
    Wondering if I should dispatch a barrage of crocodile tears from my eyelids
    Just to assuage the questioning looks of the crowd.

    I secretly wish you could have meant more to me while you were alive
    But I felt betrayed;
    Shoved in a closet and gagged
    Feet bound, gasping for air.

    Do you get a similar feeling now in your coffins
    With the blackness of your tombs surrounding you,
    Encased in layers of earth
    From which there is no escape?

    Or have your spirits departed to soar among the heavens
    Your bodies mere husks of what you once were
    Angry emotions long since dissipated
    And your eyes closed in rest?




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