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    dots Submission Name: Ignorant Onesdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Angry
    Total Views: 590
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    Description:
       I cannot stand people who think they know me


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    dotsIgnorant Onesdots
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    Go to work!
    Take this shit we throw at you,
    because we're the ignorant ones,
    we're the ones who don't know you but think we do!!

    Begin another 8hr shift after finishing one at your another job,
    chug that energy drink like you've never done before,
    paint that clown face on...
    Don't you dare forget that smile!!

    Because you know that's what you and I hide behind!
    behind the tears of a clown,
    I am,
    Forever I will be,
    For no one knows my pain,
    and those fears that take over me...

    Yet I GO TO WORK!
    Take this shit we throw at you,
    because we're the ignorant ones,
    we're the ones who don't know you but think we do!!




    Submitted on 2010-07-08 06:57:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I feel you.This one goes out to the ones who endure bullshi, for those [censored]s who know everything that just is'nt so.You just pointed out the lines of privacy and illusionist.You can be very private at your job to the degree where coworkers work with you almost everyday and they feel they know you all the way but you can lead ppl on letting them see what u want them to because truth is, is that the entirety of truth can be too much for someone to handle.There was nothing unclear about it I mean [censored] I like it.Overall it deals with one who's mysterious on the outside only to protect and keep those ignorant ones from seeing whats inside.I go thru this [censored] every weekend when I do small shows.It's weird how writers grab their readers.Peace 2 thumbs up Jackz
    | Posted on 2010-07-08 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]


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