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    dots Submission Name: Just take anotherdots
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    Author: therottenapple
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 2/5/21
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 374
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 598



    Description:
       In the last few days a few things have went down and they have mixed with a song I've been listening to. I recently got braces and I'm now going through all the things that are wrong with society that we have to put our children through pain and humility in my head. But with the braces comes pain and pain comes pain managment. All they, the dentists and my parents, can do is try to throw drugs down my throat. I'm getting a little pissed at this. Also my parents accused me of stealing sleeping pills. So this is my way of saying fuck you.

    Oh, and the song was Nail and Noose by Otep.


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    dotsJust take anotherdots
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    Heroin, vicadin
    Whiskey, ecstasy
    Codine, Morphine
    Love Love

    The good man needs his
    Prescriptions filled
    The good man just needs
    To pop more pills

    Daddy needs weed
    And mom more crack
    Letís sit back and watch
    The demons attack

    Letís try to forget
    This shitty life we live

    LSD, PCP
    Percocet, Lorcet
    Cocaine, Relieve the pain
    Let us all go numb

    This is the ache
    We canít escape
    And the lie
    We wonít untie




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