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    dots Submission Name: Pain Awaydots
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    Author: MrBear
    ASL Info:    19/M/Ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 59/109/48
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsPain Awaydots
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    you heard she could take the pain away,
    calm the night thunder -
    storming in your mind,
    the clamor went on forever.

    you seen her take the pain away,
    eyes were glazing over -
    the walls had turned to blurs,
    you kept on glancing over.

    you felt her take the pain away,
    that little pearl pebble -
    rocking you to sleep,
    stoned and can't swallow.

    I'll send my love and pray for you,
    you, who's numb and cold -
    3am, empty bottle,
    bed ridden, comatose.

    ~ Teddy Dayton ~




    Submitted on 2010-07-09 00:08:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i this a lot a dam shame i'm the first to comment but am very complemented in doing so :) so I take it your Teddy or is this something you read and posted it by another author either or I enjoyed it thanks for posting it really painted a picture in my head this I enjoy the most out of reading others posts

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2010-07-15 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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