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    Author: Duke Medhat
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    5.08 - 58/38/24
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 652
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    Bytes: 463



    Description:
       The name of that friend is Hassan El Haddad. And this poem is a friendly reproach.


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    Bitten and converted, he was.
    The one whom I called my best friend.
    Trying to defy the social hierarchy laws.
    Wending in the vulgar and imbecilesí road to the end.

    O my friend we are the dandies and dandizettes as you know.
    A man like you, has no chance facing us toe to toe.
    Masters of the Campus we were, Masters of the career we will.
    In the Stone Age, you and your imbecilic friends will still.




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