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    dots Submission Name: Elementdots

    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    I break everything that I touch
    But I suppose, this holds true for everyone
    Because nothing is immune
    To the touch of the fingers of time
    Even fine wine will spoil, you will find

    And so I can't help but ponder
    On how I will lose everything
    Because nothing is waiting at the end
    And as my heart begins to mend
    I'm crazy to want to lose you again

    And not a thing that we do will matter
    All paths will fade away
    The slate is busy whiping itself clean
    Today you are my memory
    But sooner or later we will all be forgotten

    I will never forget you, not even for a second
    But I won't be here forever
    And those who remember me
    Will fade as well
    And so on forever
    Eventually it's like we were never here

    Our footprints will forever fade
    But before they do
    I'd like someone to
    Someday look and find
    Your footprints next to mine

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      Nice effort.Timeless.Ppl can evaluate this and learn.Very nice one
    | Posted on 2010-07-12 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]

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