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    dots Submission Name: My Fair Bonny Wee Lassdots

    Author: whirl
    ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886/666/92
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A short poem in a scottish dielect.

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    dotsMy Fair Bonny Wee Lassdots

    Och, Isn't she sweet,
    Och, Isn't she bonny,
    wi' her cute wee wily ways,
    keeps ya smilin' for days an' days.
    Look at the way she smiles,
    like butter would'nae melt,
    bouncin' aboot in her wee frock,
    sunshine catchin' each fair lock.
    Isn't she jist an angel?
    she comes wi halo an' a',
    ye jist canny help but grin,
    at the antics o' this wee yin.
    She likes tae ken ye see her,
    as she twirls aboot the room,
    Och, she has such class,
    my fair, bonny wee lass.

    Submitted on 2010-07-14 12:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really enjoyed this piece, Michelle.
    the sweetness of this write was exulted with the Scottish dialect. i found it very creative and tender.

    you have properly depicted a beautiful bonnie lass.
    as ive told you i am enamored with Scotland. i plan on visiting in a few years.

    its great to see you back and writing. i look forward to reading more of your stuff. i would also love if you posted some pics of some landscapes etc.


    p.s. did you know that you were the first person to have read anything from me on this site? you also faved it. thank you.
    | Posted on 2010-07-16 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! Delightful! The dialect makes this poem remarkable, and one can just picture the bonnie lass twirling about the room.

    I love your scottish poems with the dialect!
    | Posted on 2010-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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