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    dots Submission Name: Proud To Be A Scotdots
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    Author: whirl
    ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886/666/92
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       Another short poem, written in a Scottish dielect.


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    dotsProud To Be A Scotdots
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    Tae hear the waves,
    doon o'er the shore,
    always remind me o' hame,
    the sight o' the hills,
    o'er on Arran,
    remind me o' where I came.
    An' here I'll be,
    forever maire,
    this Jock is full o' pride,
    aye, here I'll be,
    tae ma dyin' day,
    wi' ma clan right by my side.




    Submitted on 2010-07-14 12:49:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You've made my day by posting some of your Scottish poems! They are perfect, and a delight to read. How I would love to hear them recited!

    I remember this one, and it is wonderful!
    | Posted on 2010-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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