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    dots Submission Name: Evening Dressdots
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    Author: whirl
    ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886/666/92
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    dotsEvening Dressdots
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    Long, black and beautiful,
    my brand new evening dress,
    but how on Earth I'll fit in,
    is anybody's guess.
    I'll pull and squeeze,
    and hold my breath,
    pinch my buttocks tight,
    Oh, dear God, just let it fit,
    or we'll be here all night.
    Fix the collar, adjust the bust,
    cut loose thread from the wrist,
    just one more thing before I go.....
    does my bum look big in this??




    Submitted on 2010-07-14 12:58:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my! Methinks it would look good in anything!

    Delightful poem!! Your mischief is showing again!
    | Posted on 2010-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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