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    dots Submission Name: Arty Fartydots
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    Author: whirl
    ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886/666/92
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 551
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    dotsArty Fartydots
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    I'm not going to get all arty farty,
    and use words nobody understands,
    I'm not going to try and make you believe,
    that I had this poem thoroughly planned.
    In my verse it's all straight forward,
    to read it, you don't need a degree,
    it makes it far more enjoyable,
    if what I mean is clear, you see?
    I'm tired of reading poetry,
    that has words only a professor would know,
    not everyone has a brain like Einstein,
    how about some poems for the average Joe?




    Submitted on 2010-07-14 13:03:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Bravo! Your mischief is showing here!!

    | Posted on 2010-07-14 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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