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Arty Farty

Author: whirl
ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland
Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886 /666 /92
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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Arty Farty

I'm not going to get all arty farty,
and use words nobody understands,
I'm not going to try and make you believe,
that I had this poem thoroughly planned.
In my verse it's all straight forward,
to read it, you don't need a degree,
it makes it far more enjoyable,
if what I mean is clear, you see?
I'm tired of reading poetry,
that has words only a professor would know,
not everyone has a brain like Einstein,
how about some poems for the average Joe?

Submitted on 2010-07-14 13:03:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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