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    dots Submission Name: ...isola...dots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    57/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2777/1297/258
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
    Total Views: 545
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 240



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    dots...isola...dots
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    her enormous eyes
    swallowed the earth

    like gray-green pools
    of immense delight

    that held flickering crystals
    of rapt concern

    as lively as the solemn
    palmistry of night




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    ||| Comments |||
      eyes in isolation
    transmitting the unanswered
    telegrams of the soul

    a wonderful view from those windows, rws
    | Posted on 2010-07-17 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]
      Iris

    her colossal eyes
    imbibe worlds unknown

    like chromatic pools
    of vast enchantments

    that held iridescent quartz
    of enamored truth

    as vivacious as the somber
    psaltery of evening

    you're a master of simplistic complexity. i am enamored with this style of yours. thanks for the good times/reads/lessons.

    be well
    -john-paul
    | Posted on 2010-07-15 00:00:00 | by rev.jpfadeproof | [ Reply to This ]


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