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    dots Submission Name: yummy goodie cookie cake and icecreamdots
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    Author: MrBear
    ASL Info:    19/M/Ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 59/109/48
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    yummy goodie cookie cake and icecream.
    eat éclairs, miscellaneous pastries.
    carrot cake is icky lick the frosting.
    sugar cookies, love em, very tasty.

    yummy goodie cookie cake and icecream.
    yuMMy gOOdie cOOkie cAKe and icecream.
    YummY GoodiE CookiE CakE and icecream.
    yUmmy gOodie cOokie cAke and icecream.

    yummy goodie cookie cake and icecream.
    so young and living in candyland world.
    red velvet cake, vanilla topping swirled.
    float cotton candy balloons the wind thwirled

    yummy goodie cookie cake and icecream.
    yuMMy gOOdie cOOkie cake and icecream.
    YummY GoodiE CookiE drugs and icecream.
    yUmmy gOodie cOokie cake and icecream.

    ~ TeDDy DaYTon ~




    Submitted on 2010-07-15 00:05:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow!!...this is sooo much FUN!!!...and tasty.
    And i think i just gained 5lb :(
    lol
    YummY ;) x
    | Posted on 2010-07-15 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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