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    dots Submission Name: Mother Naturedots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Spoof/Nature
    Total Views: 520
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 348



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    dotsMother Naturedots
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    I long to run with the wind
    Go where the leaves blow
    Or even the places rain drops, drop...

    Swept away by Mother Nature herself...
    Take me away
    As if I were a light snow fall of your's

    Mother Nature
    Take me away from this life
    What you have created intruges me...




    Submitted on 2010-07-15 05:58:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Theres this park that I go to everytime I get a chance.I think of it when I read this.Magical Mother Nature.A pretty short one, nice.It's always good to absorb the energy of her.

    RG
    | Posted on 2010-09-02 00:00:00 | by Rex Gold | [ Reply to This ]
      It is a Human instinct to want to be free; free as the Wind! To have Nature and the Wind absolve all our human difficulties, and for a moment fly away into the ether, pure and free, and absolved from all contact with earthly pain and cares!

    Nice work, pretty lady!

    | Posted on 2010-07-16 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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