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    dots Submission Name: posteddots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 587
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    dotsposteddots
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    wit no reason to leave i stay posted
    where are you now compared to when we first met
    when we first became friends
    since then who are you to judge who i am
    when you barely just noticed yourself
    you cant compare me to then
    im still no one
    just someone in dis town i like to run
    dat you like to run through
    but only become another one of da other ones
    in da crowd pushed back to da far corner
    soon to be forgotten just like any other bum
    at least im someone
    unlike you
    runnin da cuts to stay true

    u can be da realist
    ima be da idealist




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