On The Rocks

Author: whirl ASL Info:    33/F/Scotland Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 886 /666 /92 Words: 80

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On The Rocks

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I try to read it's glacier depths, As it sits there in my drink, I swirl the liquid round, Not quite knowing what to think. Trying to find my answers there, I look deep into the icy haze, Everything around me fades away, I get lost in a million ways. Not a single answer have I found, And now my ice has begun to shrink, I guess I'll have to leave my questions, Until I get another drink.

Submitted on 2010-07-15 17:14:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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lol love it....id say most have been here... with each drink the questions only deepen and multiply rather than being answered lol..and even if you do find answers they generally dont make sense the next day or like ron says ...they cant be remembered...funny how humans think eh...

| Posted on 2010-07-29 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]

lol! I have stared into a thousand drinks with a million questions! Drinkin' and thinkin' is kinda part of the club scene at times. I have gotten some really good ideas from mulling questions whilst staring into my drink; but I couldn't remember any of them the next day!!!! This is delightful, and fun to read. Your mischief is showing again!

| Posted on 2010-07-15 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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