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    dots Submission Name: happpy tym 4eva wit udots
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    Author: Mud
    ASL Info:    18/f/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 55/98/57
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshapppy tym 4eva wit udots
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    i wrote a whole poem today
    if i was Poe it wouldn't have gotten deleted from my drafts
    maybe a raven
    would've crapped on it but that's all.
    i know a guy called Allen Ginsberg from long ago
    who'd agree that strepsils can't cure a smokers cough,
    that murakami understands loneliness but welsh understands what grime really means,
    that growing up isn't the answer really,
    and that tree you climbed was never so tall to begin with,

    or that as you sober down from one of those free verse nights
    rhyming is one of the greatest delights

    me? i don't know anything.




    Submitted on 2010-07-16 13:19:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Clever and the lack of cliché'd endings (from which I cannot escape) is utterly magnificent. MSS x
    | Posted on 2010-07-17 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]


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