Commercial Drive by lynn marsters

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Submission Name: Commercial Drive dots

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Author:	lynn marsters
ASL Info:	20/f/canada
Elite Ratio:	3.41 - 49/61/32
Words:	32

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	556
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	267

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Commercial Drive dots

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Insects rule the Earth
Flowers fake the fucking

Aching to full berth
Chickens allways shitting

Tangerine and Tourmaline
Generic pantomime

Kyanite and forest green
They're lying all the time

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