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    dots Submission Name: I'll Be Theredots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.21 - 14/83/123
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 710
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    dotsI'll Be Theredots
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    I just need some time to catch my breath and to calm this beating in my chest.

    It's just so crazy
    this feel'n that I get.

    I've been tripping with these left shoes
    just to try to get closer to you.

    I know the sun still will shine
    when I feel the rain

    and even though I'm
    in pain life won't end in this way.

    Take this love and believe
    that you are my life.

    My arms will keep you
    from the cold and glaring stares.

    My caring heart will hold you
    tightly and you'll know
    that no one else can compare.

    I'll be with you through it all
    even during the cold nights
    of the blinding snow fall.
    My arms will keep you warm.

    I'll be there.
    I'll be there
    through it all.




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