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    dots Submission Name: reunions in public placesdots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    22/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 581/277/103
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    He comes with coffee and memories,
    with teeth poised in silent charm.
    The cold follows him; the smell of wet concrete
    and dead leaves
    There is a brief embrace and a few short words
    A shared drink
    Then, distracted he leaves
    With his baby sister in my hands
    and my last cigarette in his




    Submitted on 2010-07-17 08:36:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whatever happened there, it sounds [censored]ed up. I like the edge on it, try a few rhyming couplets just to break it up? Either way. I liked. MSS x
    | Posted on 2010-07-17 00:00:00 | by MornSweetSong | [ Reply to This ]


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