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    dots Submission Name: The Man I Have Becomedots
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    Author: Destin
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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    Description:
       A little look at my self.


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    dotsThe Man I Have Becomedots
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    The man I have become
    is strong,
    is brave,
    is self-sufficent.

    The man have become
    has lied to save lives,
    scrambled to protect them,
    calmly taken them.

    The man have become
    has set foot in a dozen foreign lands,
    and fees more at home there
    than the one he was born in.

    The man I have become
    pushed away love,
    mourned it's passing,
    to protect her from pain.

    The man I have become
    shuns friendships,
    for the good of the innocent,
    or so he believes.

    The man I have become
    sleeps in fits,
    seeing faces long gone,
    of those that bled for him.

    The man I have become
    stares at the mirror,
    and asks for the hundredth time,
    "who are you?"

    The man I have become
    is not who I expected to be,
    as a child,
    when the world was so bright.

    The man I have become
    does the immoral,
    to protect others,
    and I hate him for it.




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