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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet - The Character Is Fogdots

    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSonnet - The Character Is Fogdots

    Sorrow, the tempest weeping ever so weakly,
    familiarities- dreaming of a dream.
    Anguish, the earth-shaking pain- so obliquely,
    insularities- binding trapped scream.

    Shade- Your face in reflection, the memory; gone.
    Wandering misconceptions, who are you?
    Wraith- Come to drag me away, bring me to Charon
    dredging the waters soul, behold bugaboo.

    Drowning in our decent to Hell, see it's light.
    Shining bright it seems to kill us with smog.
    You're our holy statue of crumbling tripolite,
    blowing back in the wind the character is fog

    Today is now, welcome our pariah's cloud.
    In our final moment we will reveal the shroud.

    Submitted on 2010-07-19 15:49:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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