She makes me wanna love again by Dreamer5009

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Submission Name: She makes me wanna love again dots

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Author:	Dreamer5009
ASL Info:	16, Male, USA
Elite Ratio:	5.02 - 73/53/28
Words:	159

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	669
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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She makes me wanna love again dots

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I've been used
My heart mislead
I've been abused
Now afraid to tread

I'm stronger now than I was then
Aware now of my mistakes
I'll never make them again
'Cause I'm filled with the venom of snakes

My nature now is hidden from view
I watch carefully from above
The only thing that can find my heart is you
So, it will again begin to love

I've been wronged before
I don't wish to be again
For me, you open up a new door
And take me back then

When I had no fears
No doubts crossed my mind
when I could still cry tears
And I'd never leave you behind

So for you
I do what I fear most
by hoping that its true
My heart is loves host

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