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Submission Name:
She makes me wanna love again
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Author:
Dreamer5009
ASL Info:
16, Male, USA
Elite Ratio:
5.02 - 73/53/28
Words:
159
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
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She makes me wanna love again
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I've been used
My heart mislead
I've been abused
Now afraid to tread
I'm stronger now than I was then
Aware now of my mistakes
I'll never make them again
'Cause I'm filled with the venom of snakes
My nature now is hidden from view
I watch carefully from above
The only thing that can find my heart is you
So, it will again begin to love
I've been wronged before
I don't wish to be again
For me, you open up a new door
And take me back then
When I had no fears
No doubts crossed my mind
when I could still cry tears
And I'd never leave you behind
So for you
I do what I fear most
by hoping that its true
My heart is loves host
Submitted on 2010-07-20 10:43:04
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