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    dots Submission Name: She makes me wanna love againdots
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    Author: Dreamer5009
    ASL Info:    16, Male, USA
    Elite Ratio:    5.02 - 73/53/28
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 565
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 894



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    dotsShe makes me wanna love againdots
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    I've been used
    My heart mislead
    I've been abused
    Now afraid to tread

    I'm stronger now than I was then
    Aware now of my mistakes
    I'll never make them again
    'Cause I'm filled with the venom of snakes

    My nature now is hidden from view
    I watch carefully from above
    The only thing that can find my heart is you
    So, it will again begin to love

    I've been wronged before
    I don't wish to be again
    For me, you open up a new door
    And take me back then

    When I had no fears
    No doubts crossed my mind
    when I could still cry tears
    And I'd never leave you behind

    So for you
    I do what I fear most
    by hoping that its true
    My heart is loves host




    Submitted on 2010-07-20 10:43:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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