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    dots Submission Name: Samanthadots
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    Author: EileenToTheLeft
    ASL Info:    28/f/va
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 16/36/55
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSamanthadots
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    Her teeth grind
    and I hear my own echos and try to
    breathe through them.
    She
    rolls over,
    as I commanded
    with a simple turn of body;
    hers and mine, congruent, beating.
    Taking turns,
    getting what we wanted.
    Left side. Right side. No sore sides.
    We shut our eyes to see...
    nothing. and that's fine.
    All of a sudden,
    I
    need to tell her
    that sometimes
    I trace the outlines
    of her tattoos
    while she's asleep.
    I
    need to tell her
    my echos are
    her echos, actually.
    and they say sweet nothings
    to me.
    I
    need to tell her
    that I am wakeful
    just to keep this feeling
    present in my mind.
    I
    want her to know
    these things.
    But instead
    I
    find myself saying,
    "Stop."
    And
    for a moment,
    subconsciously,
    she concedes.




    Submitted on 2010-07-21 22:41:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that was awesome. theres a reason im stalking you lol and this is it. i love your raw emotion, sounds as though it could be an event that actually happened. and - even if not true - lends to its credulity. it seems pure throughout and i enjoyed it quite a bit. :D
    | Posted on 2010-08-13 00:00:00 | by Aphotic Sunrise | [ Reply to This ]


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