Description: My boyfriend broke up with me.....over text message. Something about me not communicating enough and how it's unfixable.....riiiight, that's the reason. *sigh* I know 21 is a bit old for a first boyfriend but I just feel a little broken. Of course, my poem is inspired by this. I never thought I'd write a break-up poem.
Keep On Moving -------------------------------------------
Iím feeling pain but itís just a season
Iíve stop searching for all the reasons
I looked for a rock to keep me stable
Life came at me and turned the tables
Now I have a mountain that needs moving
Iíve got a heart that needs some soothing
I feel like Iím falling when everythingís steady
I travel this road that seems earthquake ready
I forgot what was mine, what was priceless
Gave away my heart and now Iím lifeless
Iím left with regret but I mainly feel stupid
Trusted the wrong people, trusted cupid
We all make mistakes but the point is recognizing
Pointing a finger is just another way of hiding
I made mistakes but I still kept on fighting
Those who give up, you wonít find in writing
So Iíll keep moving even if Iím hurting
Iím wiser now but I wonít stop learning
Let me start off by saying that 21 is not to old for a first boyfriend. If you are really mature for your age and hadn't found anyone in the city you were living in that you wanted to date. Then you didn't nothing you can do to help your feelings. I wouldn't put it on here though that your first boyfriend was at age 21.
As for the poem it seems that even though this was your first break up you are a good enough writer to write a poem that seems like it is just another break up that hurt and that you have learned that you will get over it and life will go on. So I have to give you props for that part of it.