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    dots Submission Name: the motherdots
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    Author: hanifabibi
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Am I doing this poem in right way ,
    plz help me
    i have to write paper about this poem..help plz


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    dotsthe motherdots
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    “The mother” is a poem about a woman who is guilty to have several abortions and she is regardful about her decisions. But it seems to be that she has no other choice. As a mother, she is regardful that she could not do certain things which mother supposed to do what her kids. Thesis
    The poem begins by declaring that "Abortions will not let you forget .It will remind the mother that you got but you did not get. Woman thinks that she is hunted by her aborted children. Her guilt makes lives the aborted child; she hears ghostly voices of her “dim killed children”. This voice reminded of the pain they are going through. It might possible that any how she justifies by others but she can’t forgive herself what she has done.




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