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    dots Submission Name: another minutedots
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    Author: heartless_
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 284/251/154
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       just this past week i got in a fight with someone i've been in love with for over two years, we were close to tryin but i ended up pushing him away and now i'm alone and this is my day as it has been since he left...i just wish i knew how to get him to talk to me..


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    I sit here thinking of you,
    Iíve been doing this since you walked away.
    Canít seem to forget or move on,
    Another minute goes by.

    It s now past the time I would call you,
    For no particular reason, just hear your voice.
    Weíd talk about a lot of nothing, then go to bed.
    But no more phone calls, text or a word from you.

    Another minute passes that I miss you,
    I tried to apologize, but the hurt was too much
    You just couldnít get past it this time,
    And before the next minute you were gone.

    I sat there sure you would be back,
    Weíve had fights before, but none like this,
    Another hour passes and I know itís over.
    Another minute passes as the tears start
    I stop breathing wondering how to go on,
    For two years Iíve loved you, now youíre gone.

    Another minute passes and my life crumbles,
    Another minute brings no more joy,
    It took less than a minute to destroy,
    What took me two years to build

    Another minute spent begging you,
    Please come home and give me another chance,
    Another minute passes with nothing,
    Not a word, not a sound besides crying.
    Then you text and tell me your done,
    Just forget you and your number.

    Another minute passes and Iím alone,
    Another minute leaves me hopeless.
    I wish I didnít see the next minute,
    I wish you were still here with me
    Another minute wasted crying.




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