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    dots Submission Name: Sixth Year Anniversarydots
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    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    27 Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 261/310/148
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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       Sooo I've been on this site for 6 (yes, SIX) years now. That's cool. Kind of a random thing but I really sort of like that achievement.


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    dotsSixth Year Anniversarydots
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    The site of unraveling
    through three boyfriends and a lesbian,
    my commonplace thoughts remain unknown.
    Anonymity at its best on the web
    hides me in its shadow.
    The place to say I'm falling, I fell, or
    Want to Fall has been here.
    For six years
    can you believe it?
    Not I.
    No, certainty not.
    Words to count, emotions to kill,
    and all of it waiting to be submitted here.
    Live. Love. Write. And Be Happy.




    Submitted on 2010-07-24 23:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the sixth day
    of the sixth month
    of the sixth year
    in the seventh heaven...

    | Posted on 2010-07-25 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Aah, what courses through our lives. It's strange to think how time passes and what remains/doesn't remain constant. This was a nice little nod to ES, but I liked its focus as more on you/what you've been through. Its conveyed in a light way, but still holds weight. y'know?

    yeah.

    Good stuff. Happy sixth.

    -Emeya
    | Posted on 2010-07-25 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]


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