Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Sixth Year Anniversarydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Celeste J. Bell
    ASL Info:    27 Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 261/310/148
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
    Total Views: 710
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 495



    Description:
       Sooo I've been on this site for 6 (yes, SIX) years now. That's cool. Kind of a random thing but I really sort of like that achievement.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSixth Year Anniversarydots
    -------------------------------------------


    The site of unraveling
    through three boyfriends and a lesbian,
    my commonplace thoughts remain unknown.
    Anonymity at its best on the web
    hides me in its shadow.
    The place to say I'm falling, I fell, or
    Want to Fall has been here.
    For six years
    can you believe it?
    Not I.
    No, certainty not.
    Words to count, emotions to kill,
    and all of it waiting to be submitted here.
    Live. Love. Write. And Be Happy.




    Submitted on 2010-07-24 23:53:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      the sixth day
    of the sixth month
    of the sixth year
    in the seventh heaven...

    | Posted on 2010-07-25 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Aah, what courses through our lives. It's strange to think how time passes and what remains/doesn't remain constant. This was a nice little nod to ES, but I liked its focus as more on you/what you've been through. Its conveyed in a light way, but still holds weight. y'know?

    yeah.

    Good stuff. Happy sixth.

    -Emeya
    | Posted on 2010-07-25 00:00:00 | by Lady of Shalott | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    186343

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry