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    dots Submission Name: All Day Longdots

    Author: xxsullenangelxx
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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    dotsAll Day Longdots

    I sit and think about it
    All day long
    Why in the hell
    Is cutting so wrong

    It keeps away
    Morbid thoughts
    When I find myself thinking
    Of the urges Iíve fought

    I see the way you look at me
    You act like Iím a freak
    But this is what happens
    When I donít speak

    I keep all the pain inside
    This is my only escape
    Donít look at me like that
    Itís only a scrape

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