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    Author: Chriswifeybear
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 361
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       I felt the need to put this up here because my husband wrote it and an ex girlfriend of his stole it, and i dont want anyone believing her lies


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    forever didnt last
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    a single rose lay on his chest
    as they lower him into the ground
    do not shead a tear
    for you are the reason
    he called a blade to stop his own
    this is what he wanted
    this was his escape from
    the pain that consumed him
    do not cry for him
    for you will soon forget about
    his shattered heart
    his love
    the broken promises you made him
    you promised him forever
    but forever didnt last when
    you walked away
    forever didnt exist when
    he ended his




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