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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 355
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Some say there is an Elite of the wealthy

    Some say they are reptilian aliens

    Some say they govern this world for their own ends

    Some say that 80% of the wealth of this world
    Is owned by 10% of the population

    Some say this 10% rule or destiny
    That they have us all enslaved
    Through religion, politics and money

    Some say that they sell us, what is already ours
    That they thieve from us, our planet
    And we are nothing, nothing more than paltry thralls
    In their eyes

    Could any of this be true ?
    And if so

    Me, I say

    Parasites and cowards all

    Be they reptilian or human

    Still mere parasites and cowards
    Hiding in the secrecy
    Hiding inside their brainwashing
    Little pretentious puppets masters
    Who by deception
    Lead the children of mankind astray

    They live and breed on fear
    And with seven deadly sins
    To whisper poison in your ear

    But those same seven deadly sins
    Are their code and their creed

    Despots, cowards and parasites all
    These slick mean spirited
    Underhanded criminals
    Who feast until them belly full
    And puking on the world and us all
    Grin with their self-satisfied belch
    It is the lowest form of life
    That will glut itself on another blood
    And feed its filthy little ego
    Without concern
    And sit within their privilege and comfort
    While half the world starves

    Royal families, bloodlines and politicians
    Cowards, despots, parasites and tyrants
    Their cultural concoction
    Of our present situation
    As we scrabble and scrounge upon our own Earth
    For the pittance we are granted
    Just to survive

    Cold blooded indeed
    Be they reptile or human
    Sick with their give me and heart illiteracy

    Some say there is an Elite of the wealthy

    Some say they are reptilian aliens

    Some say they govern this world for their own ends

    Some say that 80% of the wealth of this world
    Is owned by 10% of the population






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