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    dots Submission Name: Turn Awaydots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 487
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsTurn Awaydots
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    The shadow lifted off his heart, but only briefly.
    Her words melodic. And spoke politely.
    Her touch soothed his tender trust.
    And he wondered if it were love or lust.

    The light abandons him again.
    She tells lies behind her wicked grin.
    Her words were seductive and cold.
    The worst ever told.
    She weaved his mind, and stunned his pride.
    He tried to run but nowhere to hide.
    She beckoned with I love you.
    And he spat I fucking hate you.

    He gazed into her eyes.
    Filled with auspicious lies.
    And said to her a final time.
    Now I draw the line.
    You gave up so now I leave.
    When yu can longer breathe,
    And your world is empty.
    I won't run or call, i'll simply....
    Turn away!




    Submitted on 2010-07-31 02:17:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oii, man this is brilliant!! I am truly impressed with the emotions that I received by reading this. Strangely enough i was able to relate to this poem in a different sense. Truly amazing.. i look forward to reading your other pieces :)
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    | Posted on 2010-08-06 00:00:00 | by cherrywillow | [ Reply to This ]


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