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    dots Submission Name: Deaf Boydots
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    Author: wovenwords
    ASL Info:    19/F/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 108/303/189
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDeaf Boydots
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    Buzzing in your ear
    like white noise
    and then: a violent change of pitch
    a phantom limb

    (don't you know,
    nothing appears to be present
    'til it changes)

    Oh deaf boy,
    you forget your ailment
    'til it comes a'callin'
    from silent A-sharp to awful B-flat

    A wailing scream
    like a glass door in a wind storm,
    you're reminded of everything
    that you forgot was everything.




    Submitted on 2010-07-31 15:37:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It's a blessing to forget pain and sorrow
    It's crucial we remmember hurt
    If only for the sake of tomorrow.
    Please let the deaf boy be he will come around they always do.
    Nice piece burst forth peotry in me easy.
    This here grand. Down side wish it were longer but it's good. Don't mind me!
    | Posted on 2010-08-03 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]


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