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    dots Submission Name: LOVE IS WHAT I LOOK FORdots
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    Author: zomp96
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    dotsLOVE IS WHAT I LOOK FORdots
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    Love is what I look for along life's street.
    Love is what I look for in ev'ry one I meet.
    Friends, they may be rich or poor,
    And the color of their skin
    Doesn't worry meat all.
    I only look for beauty from within.

    Love is what I look for in children at play.
    Love is what I look for in darkness and in the day.
    Let the seasons come and go
    And whatever they may bring,
    I will always cherish those that will make me smile,
    Make my life worthwhile,
    Never cause me pain,
    And make me fall in love each day all over again.

    Love is what I look for in sea and sky and star.
    Love is what I look for in all the things that are.

    from VERSES & LYRICS
    c 2006 Zishan Evans




    Submitted on 2010-08-03 01:28:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It is a lovely verse. Great hearts intent. If anyone tries to chop you down, just keep moving.
    Nice work.
    | Posted on 2010-08-03 00:00:00 | by Demister | [ Reply to This ]


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