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    dots Submission Name: A take on "Ride a Cock Horse to Banbury Crossdots
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    Author: edcherry
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       A fun take on an old nursery rhyme. Yes, and your mind can paint an hysterical end result.


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    dotsA take on "Ride a Cock Horse to Banbury Crossdots
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    Ride a cockhorse to Brighton resort
    to meet a fine lass all men want to court.
    With rings on her fingers, and bells in her hair,
    she rides side-saddle on a snow white mare.

    She plays soft drums with wee feet and toes,
    so her music rings out wherever she goes.
    Her voice enchants, her fingers pluck strings,
    and the people all round join in as she sings.

    Before you go, please listen to reason,
    learn and avoid when her mare's in season.
    A rampart cockhorse can answer no rein;
    he'd sow wild oats, and you would profane!




    Submitted on 2010-08-03 20:05:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very funny Ted! Mind you, sounds like the lass herself is always in season... just as well human males don't act crazy when sex is on offer eh? ;)

    Nicely done, and a joy to read.
    | Posted on 2011-01-04 00:00:00 | by Fantastic Freya | [ Reply to This ]
      Very interesting...funny image. There have been some great stories in history about what happens when opposing factions mounts feel like mounting each other. Like in the crusades when the Christians rode in on stallions, and the Muslims were all on mares in heat. That was a good day.

    But yes, thanks for the laugh. I appreciated it very much.
    | Posted on 2010-12-04 00:00:00 | by Zabriel | [ Reply to This ]
      This.... this was interesting. =_= I can't think of another appropriate adjective.... but when I do find one, I will let you know.
    | Posted on 2010-10-22 00:00:00 | by istalkmurdoch | [ Reply to This ]


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